One of the downsides to releasing a story one page at a time is that I inevitably have to do a bridge page like this. A page that is necessary because it links two disparate scenes but does not contain anything particularly interesting. If everything goes well, this will be the last bridge page of the story.
The Best I Could Do – pt 3
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I don’t see the error that you weren’t able to correct.
It’s one of those things that isn’t obvious until someone points it out to you. I probably shouldn’t have said anything at all.